Was it not i,
you fell in love?
Was it not true,
the words we spoke?
Why does it feel
like a bondage now?
Why do questions make
the distance grow?
Shackled by whom?
Whose chain is that?
Who is this me
and who is this you?
Where have we lost
the Us we knew?
Just hold me once
and let me feel
our heartbeat, as they
used to be.
Just tell me once
and once again...
You feel the feel
the funny feel
the feel i feel
and i know its real.
Hi Samhita. loved reading your poem. After reading your poem I thought i might write something on my blog. So just wrote a comment about your poem.
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@ Sandip: Thanks so much! i feel really great to see your reply. and your post is beautiful. Thanks again! :)
ReplyDeleteawesome, a real pleasure reading your blog anytime .
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