Thursday, March 25, 2010

Evening on Marine Drive

Crackling shells
of a roasted groundnut
fell
as we walked
on the shore at sunset.

Brushing aside
that willful strand of hair
off my face
I stood and stared
at those passing unknown faces
flashing through my
lens' screen...

I wonder how
that child of four
or five
is happy with his running nose
and patchy clothes...
Where does he go
when the darkness falls?
Is there a place
that he calls his home?

And a chaiwala 
succeeds in selling me
an over priced, under-boiled
hot cup of tea
While the chipswala
grumbled softly
at my refusal
for his fare...

There are couples here
and there
and some more too far
finding the comforting embrace
of a crowded place
Where holding hands
or a spontaneous kiss
is no disgrace...
i see their smile
made me forget
the destitute's pain...

For fitness' sake
or just a break
you see them walk
and run and pace
With music on
or dogs in chains
the lifeline here
is on its shore...

And darkness falls
into the sea
Cool cars whizz by
the star struck eyes
trying to find 
the city of their dreams
As they stand and stare
for just that little more:
a house opening on to the sea,
a car that guzzles the petroleum
resources of the world
and a few thousands crisp Gandhi face
in their back pockets...

The stars lit up the sky
and the necklace was shining bright
our conversation continued
as we walked back to the junction
and back to our
race against time
an evening spent
in the heart of my Mumbai...

3 comments:

  1. B-E-A-utiful.
    One of your finest poems in my books :)

    There are a lot of cynics who brush aside the "sprit of Mumbai"

    "Sprit of Mumbai ke naam pe saare losers hai..."

    "Kahe ka spirit? Ek metro line banane mein 10 saal lagte hai..."

    "Rehne ki samasya... mehengayi...."

    And for the sake of a pretentious intellectual argument - "In the name of the spirit of Mumbai, people resume work and forget the bomb explosion that killed a hundred yesterday. They move on to keep the 'spirit' alive."

    They all miss the point.

    Look closer.

    The faces of the teeming millions are ridden with the economic and personal worries. And sometimes fear of that unattended baggage overhead in the train compartment.
    But these millions sleep well at night, tired of a hard day's work that earned them their bread and probably of their family's too. They go to sleep, not just with hope in their hearts, but with unrealized conviction that they will again be able to earn their bread the next day.

    Bombay has been a dream factory where people have exceeded their luck and potential. But now I see Bombay (not just Mumbai) slowly exceeding itself as the city of conviction. Earlier it used to make us dream. Now it makes us believe that the dream is achievable.

    The child with his wet nose doesn't care less for the world. Mumbai allows him/her to do so. The underboiled and overpriced chai still tastes better than that perfect chai without the sound of the waves and wind in your face. Bombay allows the couples to make emotional love in the privacy of hundreds of strangers around them.

    Bombay doesn't allow you to sleep with the dreams of owning swanky sets of wheels. But Bombay simultaneously teaches you humility when you travel in the luggage compartment of the Bombay local.

    Bombay shows the spirit of humanity when the lone girl drops the files at Churchgate station and two people come out of nowhere to help her and then vanish in the same nothingness before she could thank them. Bombay is about the people on the streets who ask me 'What is the time, saab?' and later thank me with a smile, as if they know me for the minute before and after.

    Somebody famous said that this is the Maximum City. But as if Bombay laughs at us for terming it so, ridiculing the mathematical concept of 'infinity' every day.

    This poem made me stand still while Bombay whizzed past me. Like those filmy shots.

    That is why I liked it.

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  2. Amazing piece! Makes you visualize the scene as though you were there all along :)

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